Love it!

Pen was a great add on.

Love this♥️

Neat short game! Thanks for sharing.

The bricks are rather made well. I would say next time go back and clean up the edges of the blue window. Don't be afraid to say grab a ruler and paint over it to get a straight line. Once the bottom layer is dry, it's okay to go back and make some edits. I will say only do this if you have normal paint and not "student" paint. Normal paint will be more solid while student paint show a lot of color under it since it's cheap paint meant for students to experiment and easier to buy. Stay away from loft artist brands and anything with the word student on it.

I really like the color of the water. I think one thing you could do to make the art stand out a bit more is if you added some specks of white where ever the water hits an object. So like the waves crashing on the beach or the waves crashing on to the dock poles would also make the art pop more. One other thing is maybe starting off the painting with a color wash? It would help with any white from the canvas from showing. Hope some of this helps!

Not bad! I like this.